Monday, October 31, 2011

Readers journal#9

Dear Ethan 
                  The book i read is called The Unknowns A mystery.The author of my book is called Benedict Carey.This author is very good with writing mystery's because he/she make the book feel realistic.By that i mean that the author makes you feel like you are in the book.
The characters in my book are:


Micky Romero


Mrs.Quartez


Diaphanta


Mrs.Smith


Tom


Mrs.Clarke
The setting is in a place called Adjacent.This is a not real place.
The plot of my book is about a place named Adjacent.This place is in the middle of mostly nowhere.The word Adjacent means nearby or next to.The place is made up of beat up mobile homes[homes people live in.]There is also a power plant there,supermarket,school.
The conflict of my book is that people are vanishing.
My favorite part of my book is the part where they find out the password.
My least favorite part is the part where they get caught.


                                       Your friend,
                                         
                                      Julio Lopez

6 comments:

  1. Dear Julio,
    I really liked your journal. Thanks for writing to me. Keep me posted!
    Sincerely,
    Ethan

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  2. Dear Julio,

    Your RJ was nice!! I'm missing a little detail though I don't really understand the plot. Please explain it better for your next RJ!! Good job!

    Sincerely,

    Tal Ella Yaron

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  3. Dear Ethan yes i will keep you posted.And your welcome.

    your friend Julio lopez

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  4. Dear Tal thank you and sorry that you did not understand the plot.And thanks for the advice.


    Your friend Julio Lopez

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  5. Dear Julio,
    This is good but describe the story a little more there isn't enough.

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  6. Dear Maria okay sorry.Also thank you for the advice.


    your friend Julio Lopez

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